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tell about your favourite festival in VietNam

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The festival in Viet Nam I like best is Tet. This might be the biggest Viet Nam festival of the year. Tet is a general holiday of Vietnamese people so everywhere can celebrate Tet. Each family will gather and prepare for Tet together. Tet always takes place around the end of January and February. This is the opportunity for all the members of the family to come back home after a hard-working year. At Tet, we will decorate the home with Tet’s ornaments. My home every Tet always brings a different vibe. Cherry blossoms and the red couplets are an integral part. Parents will give their children lucky money and good wishes. Tet is a festival that is really meaningful with Vietnamese. This is the time to care more about other members and relax. I extremely love Tet.
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IELTS essay tell about your favourite festival in VietNam

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