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People in the modern world have become too realiant on information technology

People in the modern world have become too realiant on information technology M37rQ
Reliance on information technology In recent year, it is commonly accepted that people have become too reliant on information technology. Despite this seems to be true, there are also upsides in managing it, which has become more evident to me after joining a discussion on the matter. For this reason, the main question might be how technology has changed our everyday way of being informed. In this essay, I will discuss our approach to working and studying life. Firstly, being informed and posting information about our enterprises or the companies we work for has become of paramount importance in order to get a position in the international market as well as inform clients about services. Despite this can be considered an upside, there exist also downsides. By the way of illustration, it is highly likely that a company will sign a contract with a young with a huge number of followers in social media for promotion purposes, instead of choosing the one better qualified. Secondly, in areas like studying it seems to be that new resources have made easier the way in which students can find information in one click. Nevertheless, what can be problematic are the sources consulted. If pupils can not recognise fake news, his acquisition of knowledge is bound to be confused. In light of the above, I hold the view that if we were to tackle these issues our rapport with information technology will be mentally sane. However, due to the direct impact on the quality of information available in Internet, I will pay greater attention to get knowledgeable employees in working life.
Reliance on
information
technology

In recent year, it is
commonly
accepted
that
people
have become too reliant on
information
technology. Despite this seems to be true, there are
also
upsides in managing it, which has become more evident to me after joining a discussion on the matter.
For this reason
, the main question might be how technology has
changed
our everyday way of
being informed
. In this essay, I will discuss our approach to working and studying life.

Firstly
,
being informed
and posting
information
about our enterprises or the
companies
we work for has become of paramount importance in order to
get
a position
in the international
market
as well
as inform clients about services. Despite this can
be considered
an upside, there exist
also
downsides. By the way of illustration, it is
highly
likely that a
company
will
sign
a contract with a young with a huge number of followers in social media for promotion purposes,
instead
of choosing the one better qualified.

Secondly
, in areas like studying it seems to be that new resources have made easier the way in which students can find
information
in one click.
Nevertheless
, what can be problematic are the sources consulted. If pupils can not
recognise
fake news, his acquisition of knowledge
is bound
to
be confused
.

In light of the above, I hold the view that if we were to tackle these issues our rapport with
information
technology will be mentally sane.
However
, due to the direct impact on the quality of
information
available in Internet, I will pay greater attention to
get
knowledgeable employees in working life.
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IELTS essay People in the modern world have become too realiant on information technology

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
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