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Should cars be banned from the city centers?

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Nowadays, some city has introducing vehicle-free day and private transport are banned from the city centre especially cars. So, should cars be banned from the city centre? Undoubtedly banning private cars bring about people’s inconvenience. Many people have to go to work every day so driving a car should be faster and convenient than taking a bus. Moreover, it will make people feel. uncomfortable when sharing the bus with a lot of strangers. On the other hand, banning cars still have advantages. It will reduce air pollution gradually if we don’t use our own car. Hence, it has people live better. In addition, this can solve traffic congestion, avoiding crookedness from driving in the city to parking problems. In conclusion, cars should not be banned from the city centre but vehicle-free days should be maintained to improve our life.
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IELTS essay Should cars be banned from the city centers?

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