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Tell about your best friend

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Everyone of us has at least one best friend to share happiness and sadness in our life. Me too, my best friend is Thi- an old classmate. She is a beautiful and smart girl. Besides that, she is also kind and helpful. When I feel sad, nervous or stressful, she is always by my side and encourage me to overcome difficult challenges in my life. We have been friend for more than 6 years that makes we understand each other very well. Furthermore, whenever I get absent in the classroom, she helps me in doing all the left homeworks. In addiction, she is much similar to me in many aspect. For example, we have same hobbies such as reading book, drawing and so on. When have free time. We usually watch films or just simple is chatiing together. I have learnt plenty of great qualities from her. I hope our friendship will be never changed.
Everyone
of us has at least one best friend to share happiness and sadness in our life. Me too, my best friend is
Thi
- an
old
classmate. She is a
beautiful
and smart girl.
Besides
that, she is
also
kind and helpful. When I feel sad, nervous or stressful, she is always by my side and encourage me to overcome difficult challenges in my life. We have been
friend
for more than 6 years that
makes
we understand each other
very
well.
Furthermore
, whenever I
get
absent in the classroom, she
helps
me in doing all the
left
homeworks
. In addiction, she is much similar to me in
many aspect
.
For example
, we have same hobbies such as reading book, drawing and
so
on. When have free time. We
usually
watch
films or
just
simple is
chatiing
together. I have
learnt
plenty
of great qualities from her. I hope our friendship
will be never
changed
.
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IELTS essay Tell about your best friend

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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