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tell about book you read important for some reasons .why is important ,give specific detail and example to explain.

tell about book you read important for some reasons. why is important, give specific detail and example to explain. OVry3

well, actually I read a book called "marketing strategic" on this book talk about all strategic and all aspect of business and how to understand the companies. There are two reasons make me like the book. First of all give me examples for other companies and how they grow up. The second reasons is help me how to make my own business and to develop. I remember when I was at university I try to built a website but i don't have no business plan how to start. After I borrowed this book is really useful and I still until today i read it again and again is very important for me.

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