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Staying in a nation where one has to speak foreign language he/she does not aware of can cause many social as well as professional problems. Many people believe that not knowing foreign language causes serious problems. Whereas, I partially agree with the given statement. My position is argued in further essay. These days moving to a foreign country have been a trend. Many people prefer to migrate for a job or studies. People believe that learning language is hard and headache. Now in between they don’t know the language local speaks or understands can put them in trouble. For instance, if a traveller lost his passport, phone and money and need from any residential, it will really be difficult for the person to tell them he is in trouble and need some help. Moreover, it can create misunderstanding and put him in more problems. However, due to technological advancement talking in complete strange language is become very convenient. Nowadays Google translator or speech to text applicat

Staying in a nation where one has to speak foreign language he/she does not aware of can cause many social as well as professional problems. Many people believe that not knowing foreign language causes serious problems. Whereas, I partially agree with the given statement. My position is argued in further essay. These days moving to a foreign country have been a trend. Many people prefer to migrate for a job or studies. People believe that learning language is hard and headache. Now in between they don’t know the language local speaks or understands can put them in trouble. For instance, if a traveller lost his passport, phone and money and need from any residential, it will really be difficult for the person to tell them he is in trouble and need some help. Moreover, it can create misunderstanding and put him in more problems. However, due to technological advancement talking in complete strange language is become very convenient. Nowadays Google translator or speech to text applicat BJa7d
Staying in a nation where one has to speak foreign language he/she does not aware of can cause many social as well as professional problems. Many people believe that not knowing foreign language causes serious problems. Whereas, I partially agree with the given statement. My position is argued in further essay. These days moving to a foreign country have been a trend. Many people prefer to migrate for a job or studies. People believe that learning language is hard and headache. Now in between they don’t know the language local speaks or understands can put them in trouble. For instance, if a traveller lost his passport, phone and money and need from any residential, it will really be difficult for the person to tell them he is in trouble and need some help. Moreover, it can create misunderstanding and put him in more problems. However, due to technological advancement talking in complete strange language is become very convenient. Nowadays Google translator or speech to text application are worldwide famous and most of people are aware of these boon. As an example once a family member of mine went to China and she did not know Chinese language. She used Google translator for her whole trip and it was very helpful to her. To conclude, I agree that in past time it was really problematic for a person staying in a strange country without knowing its local language. However these days due to raise in technology, it has made travelling and survival easy in any part of world.
Staying in a nation where one
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he/she does not aware of can cause
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social
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as professional problems.
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people
believe that not knowing foreign
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language
causes serious problems.
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believe that learning
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language
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hard
and headache.
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Now
in between they don’t know the
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language
local speaks or understands can put them in trouble.
For instance
, if a
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traveller
lost his passport, phone and money and need from any residential, it will
really
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language
is become
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very
convenient. Nowadays Google translator or speech to text application are worldwide
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and most of
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China and
she did not know Chinese
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language
. She
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used
Google translator for her whole trip and it was
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helpful to her.

To conclude
, I
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agree
that in
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past time
it was
really
problematic for a person staying in a strange country without knowing its local
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language
.
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However
these days due to raise in technology, it has made travelling and survival easy in any part of world.
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IELTS essay Staying in a nation where one has to speak foreign language he/she does not aware of can cause many social as well as professional problems. Many people believe that not knowing foreign language causes serious problems. Whereas, I partially agree with the given statement. My position is argued in further essay. These days moving to a foreign country have been a trend. Many people prefer to migrate for a job or studies. People believe that learning language is hard and headache. Now in between they don’t know the language local speaks or understands can put them in trouble. For instance, if a traveller lost his passport, phone and money and need from any residential, it will really be difficult for the person to tell them he is in trouble and need some help. Moreover, it can create misunderstanding and put him in more problems. However, due to technological advancement talking in complete strange language is become very convenient. Nowadays Google translator or speech to text applicat

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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