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Television Sporting shows such as the Olympics motivate the youth who do not like to exercise much.

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Digitalis ed telecast of sporting events like Olympics being shown in the television impacts the younger generation who is unlikely to involve themselves in any kind of exercise boosts them up and urges them to involve in any forms of physical activity. In my opinion, this is not the case and I don't agree with this notion. Firstly, for a well being of an individual in life we need to maintain our health. Indeed, exercise or any sporting events play a vital role here by burning unwanted calories we ate, In addition to that, it also reduces the stress that we tend to develop in our routine life. For instance, when an individual regularly does workouts his cholesterol levels in the body are maintained and he is less likely to get a cardiac arrest. Therefore, maintaining good health is the fundamental requirement in life. Secondly, the interest cannot be emphasized or insisted through external sources. A lot people in the society assume that watching sporting events and attending workshops or seminars would change the perception of the particular man and lead him to involve in any kind of fitness activities. For example, let us consider a guy who has an inadvertent attitude toward his health you cannot transform him by showing video clips or motivational speeches. Even though you events desperate efforts, he would end up remaining as a mediocre. In conclusion, the idea of being fit and following a healthy lifestyle is a matter of choice of individuals, Unless that particular person is aware of it no one in this world or any multimedia sources can modify them.

Digitalis ed telecast of sporting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 like Olympics being shown
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in the television
 impacts the younger generation who is unlikely to involve themselves in any kind of exercise boosts them up and urges them to involve in any forms of physical activity. In my opinion, this is not the case and I don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this notion.

Firstly
, for a This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-being
well being
 of an individual in life we need to maintain our health. Indeed
, exercise or any sporting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 play a vital role here by burning unwanted calories we ate, In addition
 to that, it also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviates
reduces
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 that we tend to develop in our routine life. For instance
, when an individual regularly
 does workouts his cholesterol levels in the body are Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).maintained, and
maintained and
 he is less likely to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a cardiac arrest. Therefore
, maintaining This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health is the fundamental requirement in life.

Secondly
, the interest cannot be emphasized
 or insisted through external sources. A lot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the society assume that watching sporting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 and attending workshops or seminars would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the perception of the particular This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 and lead him to involve in any kind of fitness activities. For example
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 us consider a guy who has an inadvertent attitude toward his health you cannot transform him by showing video clips or motivational speeches. Even though
 you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 desperate efforts, he would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up remaining as Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
a mediocre
.

In conclusion
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of being fit
 and following a healthy lifestyle is a matter of choice of individuals, Unless that particular person is aware of it no one in this world or any multimedia sources can modify them. 