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Television is now widespread in all communities as almost everyone has access to this medium on daily basis however the effect of television are not always positive

Television is now widespread in all communities as almost everyone has access to this medium on daily basis however the effect of television are not always positive 5AQlA

Technology is advancing with leaks and bounds. It has revolutionized each and every aspect of life television gain more popularity. In my further writing I am going to describe some negative consequences of watching television excessively and remides to curb it's ill effects To begin with television is a slow poison which lead devasting effects and encourage children towards devasting. Apart from this children become less productive its addiction is quite common to notice widening gap between children and parents. Moreover children become more lethargic they do not focus on there studies also programmes which are broadcasting through television encourage children towards aggressive behaviour. Taking a account of remedies key solutions is parental guidance parents should encourage their children to stay connected with their studies also to perform outdoor activities to enhanced their knowledge. Beside this there should be restrictions on aggressive programs. moreover government should broadcast cultural based programmes to enhanced knowledge. In conclusion it will be wise to say that television is not that bad how people make it the way they watch the need is to watch it wisely not blindly

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television
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begin
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devasting
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children
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children
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there
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programmes
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television
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children
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behaviour
.

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 account of remedies key solutions is parental guidance parents should encourage their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
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moreover
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should broadcast cultural based Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.programs
programmes
 to enhanced knowledge.

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conclusion it
 will be wise to say that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withTV setboxstationvideoaudio
television
 is not that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 how This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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make
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watch
 the need is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
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 it wisely
 not blindly