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Write a paragraph of about 150-200 words to talk about your favourite place to relax.

Write a paragraph of about 150-200 words to talk about your favourite place to relax. GwxXj
Today, I’m going to share with you a place where I often go to relax and hang out which is a café near my house named “The Corner Coffee”. As a full-time student, I have to go to school five days a week, so the only time that I can visit this place is on weekends. The coffee house is located on a street with a lot of trees planted on both sides. Additionally, it has a patio with hanging gardens that makes me feel like I’m sitting in a garden of my own. Far from the hustle and bustle of the city life in Hanoi, this place allows me to sit quietly and reflect, relaxing after a week of hard work. I can concentrate on a personal project such as reading or without being interrupted by other people. It serves excellent coffee, tea, and cakes. Thus, the place always smells very nice. The employees are also friendly and helpful. Sometimes, I go there with my family and friends. Over a nice cup of tea, we share our stories and smell the beautiful scent of the flowers. At that moment, we can escape from reality for a little while and enjoy ourselves more.
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place
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go to relax and hang out which is a café near my
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named “The Corner Coffee”. As a full-time student, I
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have to
go to school five days a week,
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the
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time that I can visit this
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is on weekends. The coffee
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house
is located
on a street with
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a lot of
trees planted on both sides.
Additionally
, it has a patio with hanging gardens that
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makes
me feel like I’m sitting in a garden of my
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. Far from the hustle and bustle of the city life in Hanoi, this
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place
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allows
me to sit
quietly
and reflect, relaxing after a week of
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hard
work. I can concentrate on a personal project such as reading or without
being interrupted
by other
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people
. It serves excellent coffee, tea, and cakes.
Thus
, the
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place
always smells
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very
nice. The employees are
also
friendly and helpful.
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Sometimes
, I go there with my family and friends. Over a nice cup of tea, we share our stories and smell the
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beautiful
scent of the flowers. At that moment, we can escape from reality for a
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little
while and enjoy ourselves more.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph of about 150-200 words to talk about your favourite place to relax.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
203 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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