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Television become more and more popular why its happen and its positive or negative development ?

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In this contempary era television play prominant role in every ones life. Owing to this, tv is become more and more renowned. This essay will discuss as to why this happen and it is positive development as well as provide supportive evidence in the upcoming paragraph. Categorically speaking, tv is one of the most entertaining resource in today's era because it act as stress buster for masses. To be more precise, individual gain knowledge related Several thing which is also related to the history and culture which leads to the enhancement in knowledge and always connected to their roots, moreover folks share the information which people know in life. In addition to it, masses watch many shows, with the help of this folks learn about bazzere thing which masses want to improve in life. For instance, 80% people like watch episode related to talents show as well as art and craft with the help of it masses showcase more interest in work. Probing to its positive effects, first and foremost, masses concise about the all over world happening, in life and learn about sacrifices of their ancestors and others thing in life, with the help of this, individuald will be influences and follow this path in life and with help of television folks get motivated in life and acknowledge about different gznres of skill in life. To exemplify, a survey was conducted in india where 50% of masses get reliable sources through television. Hammering the last nail, i can say that, masses have keen interest to watch tv as individual get more and more information about history and culure through electronic device.
In this
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contempary
era television play
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prominant
role in every ones
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life
. Owing to this,
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tv
is become
more and more renowned. This essay will discuss as to why
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this happen
and it is
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positive
development
as well
as provide supportive evidence in the upcoming paragraph.
Categorically
speaking,
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tv
is one of the most entertaining
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resource
in
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today
's era
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because
it
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act
as
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stress
buster for masses. To be more precise, individual gain knowledge related
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Several thing
which is
also
related to the history and culture which leads to the enhancement in knowledge and always connected to their roots,
moreover
folks share the information which
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people
know in
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life
.
In addition
to it, masses
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watch
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many
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shows
, with the
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help
of
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this
folks learn about
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bazzere
thing which masses want to
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improve
in
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life
.
For instance
, 80%
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people
like
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watch
episode related to talents
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show
as well
as art and craft with the
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help
of it masses showcase more interest in work.

Probing to its
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positive
effects,
first
and foremost, masses concise about the all over world happening, in
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life
and learn about sacrifices of their ancestors
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and others
thing in
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life
, with the
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help
of this,
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individuald
will be influences and follow this path in
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life
and with
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help
of television folks
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get
motivated in
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life
and acknowledge about
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different
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gznres
of
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skill
in
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life
. To exemplify, a survey
was conducted
in
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india
where 50% of masses
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get
reliable sources through television.

Hammering the last nail,
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i
can say that, masses have keen interest to
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watch
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tv
as individual
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get
more and more information about history and
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culure
through electronic device.
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IELTS essay Television become more and more popular why its happen and its positive or negative development?

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