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Television and radio have different intrinsic characteristics.

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Television and radio have different intrinsic characteristics. While radio predates television by more than thirty years, it remains more practical in terms of mobility and accessibility, indeed having gained new life by often being relayed via the internet. In its various forms of free air, satellite, and cable, television is certainly more entertaining by virtue of its visual and immersive nature. Compared to what is broadcast on the radio, television programs are more enjoyable because they usually present various topics in video format. The majority of radio programs, such as the BBC World Service, are limited to reporting current affairs, but television, on the other hand, screens more appealing subjects. These include the latest films, documentaries, talk shows, interviews, and so on. Additionally, television programs are televised not only in audio formats, like what the radio does, but also in video format. This provides its audiences with a more pleasing experience. Having said that, it is true that the radio is more practical, primarily because of its portability, which allows people to enjoy it on the move and it is not as costly as television. It is commonplace these days that people can download a radio application to their smartphones. They can then listen to it through this channel wherever they go, whereas viewing television is more complicated as it at least requires people to have a television. In addition, subscribing to cable television usually incurs a fee, but this is not applicable when it comes to the radio. To reiterate, it is my belief that the radio is less enjoyable than television because it has a wider coverage on various subjects and broadcasts programs in audio and video format. Still, it is more practical, as people can listen to it on the go and it costs less so that people can access it with ease.
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. The majority of
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, such as the BBC World Service,
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people
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application to their smartphones. They can then listen to it through this channel wherever they go, whereas viewing
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is less enjoyable than
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television
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because
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IELTS essay Television and radio have different intrinsic characteristics.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
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