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Teenagers should never be put in the same prison with adults no matter how serious their crime is. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Teenagers should never be put in the same prison with adults no matter how serious their crime is. with this? wBePY

Nowadays, youngsters are involved in an of lot crimes in society which warrants a jail term. It has been suggested that they should not be put in the same cell as grown-ups for certain reasons, and I completely agree with the opinion. This essay will discuss why these two groups of persons should not be locked together. Teenagers should not be confined in the same area as adults in a correctional facility for several reasons. Firstly, they may get abused and assaulted in the prison, due to the fact that when older inmates are kept with younger ones, they tend to feel a sense of superiority and may begin to abuse the little ones. For example, a case like this was reported at a Prison in Nigeria, where a nineteen years old boy was beaten to a coma by oldsters in the same space for refusing to wash their clothes. In addition, some of them end up getting molested sexually, which would not have been so if they had separate rooms. Furthermore, a lot of adolescents may come down with behavioural problems if allowed to stay with people above their age group, because some may end up picking bad habits and learn antisocial behaviours from these seniors and may even come out from jail worse than how they went it. For instance, studies in the past decades have revealed that about 70% of youths who were convicted came out worse than they were before going to jail, as a result, society, continues to suffer. Also, some of them have reported being cajoled by these persons into engaging in practices such as smoking. In conclusion, I think it is safer and wiser for prisons to have different cells for adults and youths.

Nowadays, youngsters are involved
 in an of lot crimes in society which warrants a jail term. It has been suggested
 that they should not be put
 in the same cell as grown-ups for certain reasons, and I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the opinion. This essay will discuss why these two groups of persons should not be locked
 together.

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Teenagers
 should not be confined
 in the same area as adults in a correctional facility for several reasons. Firstly
, they may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 abused and assaulted in the prison, due to the fact that when older inmates are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 with younger ones, they tend to feel a sense of superiority and may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 to abuse the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 ones. For example
, a case like this was reported
 at a Prison in Nigeria, where a nineteen years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 boy was beaten
 to a coma by oldsters in the same space for refusing to wash their clothes. In addition
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some
 of them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up getting molested sexually
, which would not have been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 if they had separate rooms.

Furthermore
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a lot of
 adolescents may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
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behavioural
 problems if This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
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people
 above their age group, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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some
 may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up picking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 habits and learn antisocial Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviours' is British English.behaviors
behaviours
 from these seniors and may even This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 out from jail worse than how they went it. For instance
, studies in the past decades have revealed that about 70% of youths who were convicted
 came out worse than they were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 going to jail, as a result
, society, continues to suffer. Also
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them have reported being cajoled
 by these persons into engaging in practices such as smoking.

In conclusion
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is safer and wiser for prisons to have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 cells for adults and youths. 