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Teenagers should be responsible for their decisions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Teenagers should be responsible for their decisions. xPL56

Teenagers decisions regarding to various aspects should be depend on themselves. This essay totally disagrees with this statement because teenagers have limited thinking power and they get better solution from their elders. People who are under twenty have less exposure. They are unable of taking decisions because they do not know the exact difference between right and wrong and do not know much about the circumstances outside their limits. So, parents and teachers help must be required for an accurate decision. They are a bit of vulnerable, their maturity level is not enough for taking wise choices. For instance, if there is a situation occurred related to choosing a best stream for studies, then teacher will probably be a better guider because he or she know the calibre of the student. Teenagers should seek good decisions from their elders because they are well-experienced. People, who are mature enough to take an adequate decision and whose each category are above twenty always give a better guidance to the younger ones. They have ability to cope with problems and know the value of one decision which can make or ruin someone's whole future. Elders have good viewpoints and they are very knowledgeable. Take any common problem as an example to alleviate that problem, one should require proper guidance and instead of doing something wrong if they share their issue with aged people then they will surely get good results. In conclusion, teenagers are unable of taking decisions because they do not have broad thinking level and also they should be under their parent's guidance for adequate advice.

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Teenagers
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decisions
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regarding to
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depend
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because
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teenagers
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get
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People
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decisions
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because
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know
 the exact difference between right and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 and do not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
 much about the circumstances outside their limits. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, parents and teachers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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must
be required
 for an accurate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccordsettlementarrangementdeterminationjudgmentagreement
decision
. They are a bit of vulnerable, their maturity level is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
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a
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because
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know
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calibre
 of the student.

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Teenagers
 should seek This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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decisions
 from their elders This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are well-experienced. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
, who are mature This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to take an adequate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccordsettlementarrangementdeterminationjudgmentagreement
decision
 and Did you mean "who's"?who's
whose
 each category Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "is".is
are
 above twenty always give a better guidance to the younger ones. They have ability to cope with problems and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
 the value of one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccordsettlementarrangementdeterminationjudgmentagreement
decision
 which can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 or ruin someone's whole future. Elders have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 viewpoints and they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 knowledgeable. Take any common problem as an example to alleviate that problem, one should require proper guidance and instead
 of doing something This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 if they share their issue with aged This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 then they will surely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 results.

In conclusion
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 are unable of taking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccordsettlementarrangementdeterminationjudgmentagreement
decisions
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they do not have broad thinking level and also
 they should be under their parent's guidance for adequate advice. 