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Teenagers and young people should share housework equally with their parents. Do you agree?

I tend to agree with this point of view, helping out a little with housework is okay, clearing the table or do something like this, because family is a community to which everyone contributes something. Also, by participating in household chores, teenagers learn to do many household choresand to become independent, as they acquire the necessary life skills. One should, however, not forget that today's teenagers have enough things to do and sometimes family responsibilities make it difficult for them to succeed in school, for example, due to lack of time to study.
I tend to
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with this point of view, helping out a
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little
with housework is okay, clearing the table or do something like this,
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because
family is a community to which everyone contributes something.

Also
, by participating in household chores,
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teenagers
learn to do
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many
household choresand to become independent, as they acquire the necessary life
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skills
.

One should,
however
, not forget that
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today
's
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teenagers
have
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enough
things to do and
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sometimes
family responsibilities
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make
it difficult for them to succeed in school,
for example
, due to lack of time to study.

IELTS essay Teenagers and young people should share housework equally with their parents. Do you agree?

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  American English
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93 words
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