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The advantage and disadvantages of internet

A good example of this is nearly all universities used the internet for studying and research purposes. Students are responsible every year to prepare alot of presentations and one to two research, which previously done by them throug the library as the students are responsible to read alot of books to find what they are looking for but this process takes long time. However, know the students can serf many websites and read the updated research, book, and magazine easily.
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the internet for studying and research purposes. Students are responsible every year to prepare alot of presentations and one to two research, which previously done by them throug the library as the students are responsible to read alot of books to find what they are looking for
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IELTS essay The advantage and disadvantages of internet

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1 paragraphs
80 words
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