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Teenage Years Are The Happiest Period Of Life

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In this global world there is a saying live your life fullest till the end. In many parts of the globe majority of people believe that adolescent time is the most happiest time while others argue that Grown-up adult life is better time despite of having burden of resposibilities. In this essay, I will discuss the both the stages of lives. Teenage years are the best part of the years. In that you are child and doesn't have many responsibilities either you can eat or play. For illustration in some of the research it has shown that teen life was one the happiest time of a persons live and many memories are created. But on the other hand there are also restrictions in the teens life. While they cannot go anywhere of their alone either a  guardian or parent needs to be available all the time for their safety. Adult life is full of responsibilities and improving for better life standards. Even when a person reaches adult age he is independent of taking his own decision without caring of the other's feeling. They have a job and some of them are financially independent doing their tasks but sometime it can be depressing. If the person doesn't have a good job or he is not earning the money his own parent will not support him. In my point of view Full-grown life is the best life because you are free and there is no one restrict their decisions. In conclusion every aspect of life has its own positive and negative impacts. A person should have this much freedom? depends on the individual to choose which part of his life was the best or worst.
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believe that adolescent
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while others argue that Grown-up adult
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is better
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responsibilities either you can eat or play. For illustration in
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parent will not support him.

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has its
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was the best or worst.
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IELTS essay Teenage Years Are The Happiest Period Of Life

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
283 words
5.5
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