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technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument.

technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument. AeRx
People have different views about whether or not modern-technology will replace the school's teachers. Although some people think that due to development in advanced-technology, it becomes easier for students to gain deep-knowledge and get advice from the tutor that available on the internet, but I believe that there will be need of teachers because they provide students not only accurate knowledge, but also encourage them in their studies, that is imperative to succeed. This is understandable that why people think that one day moderate -technology will completely replace the teachers. Firstly, they may think that due to availability of a wide range of books as well as web sites on the Internet, students would get deep-knowledge related to any subject without getting help from any school teacher. For example, Wikipedia is one of the famous websites where people can get any information related to any topic within few seconds. Secondly, they could also reckon that students will get an education by sitting in their own place.
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whether or not
modern-technology will replace the school's
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teachers
. Although
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people
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think
that due to development in advanced-technology, it becomes easier for
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students
to gain deep-knowledge and
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get
advice from the tutor that available on the internet,
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but
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be need
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teachers
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students
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only
accurate knowledge,
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but
also
encourage them in their studies,
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imperative to succeed.

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people
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think
that one day moderate -technology will completely replace the
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teachers
.
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, they may
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think
that due to availability of a wide range of books
as well
as
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web sites
on the Internet,
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students
would
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get
deep-knowledge related to any subject without getting
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help
from any school
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teacher
.
For example
, Wikipedia is one of the
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famous
websites where
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people
can
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get
any information related to any topic within few seconds.
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reckon that
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students
will
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get
an education by sitting in their
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IELTS essay technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
166 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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