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Nowdays so many people would prefer to study at colleges and universities in another counties rather than studying in their countries .my essay will try to show both sides of this.

Nowdays so many people would prefer to study at colleges and universities in another counties rather than studying in their countries. my essay will try to show both sides of this. B52a
Frist of all studying aboad could give students lots of opportunities to learn as much as they want or think. in fact 69 percent of students want to study higher colleges and universities in foreign countries. in developed countries education system is much more powerful and has lots of possibilities of studying well and enjoyebably than lower countries. such as if sudents study at higher Universities which were located or found in overdeveloped countries. after that they can have a part time job and work at like restaurants, hotels, stores, theme parks or gardens in order to spend on their monthly ecpenses while they are studying at colleges or kind of University. even when they travel clearly from one country to another country. Also in this time students might be able to expand their knowledges and learn new traditions during traveling. in addition to this. students always make new international students who come to university in order to learn and become kind of expert about their way. On the other hand. studying foreign countries has disadvantages. one of them is that. Studying abroad always can be required a lot of money for studying from students who are going to study in oversea. therefore in foreign countries students could have difficulties with learning, looking for flat and being alone. students who have already visited in new country to study are depressed a litel with new people, new streets and new language. these issues can be happened as more as students imagine. Sum up studying abroad is common between students. in my opinion this way is very exelent. Becouce of this when students are studying at college or university. they could expand their knowledges.
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of all
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studying
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aboad
could give
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students
lots of opportunities to learn as much as they want or
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think
.
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in
fact 69 percent of
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students
want to
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study
higher colleges and
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universities
in foreign
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countries
.
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in
developed
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countries
education system is much more powerful and has lots of possibilities of
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studying
well and
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enjoyebably
than lower
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countries
.
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such
as if
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sudents
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study
at higher
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Universities
which
were located
or found in overdeveloped
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countries
.
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after
that they can have a
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part time
job and work at like restaurants, hotels, stores, theme parks or gardens in order to spend on their monthly
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ecpenses
while they are
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studying
at colleges or kind of
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University
.
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even
when they travel
clearly
from one
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country
to another
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country
.
Also
in this time
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students
might be able to expand their
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knowledges
and learn
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new
traditions during traveling.
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in
addition to this.
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students
always
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new
international
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students
who
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come
to
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university
in order to learn and become kind of expert about their way.

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.
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studying
foreign
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countries
has disadvantages.
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one
of them is that.
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abroad always can
be required
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a lot of
money for
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studying
from
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students
who are going to
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study
in oversea.
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therefore
in foreign
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countries
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students
could have difficulties with learning, looking for flat and being alone.
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students
who have already visited in
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new
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country
to
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study
are depressed
a
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litel
with
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people
,
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streets and
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language.
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these
issues can
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as
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more
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as
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students
imagine.

Sum up
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abroad is common between
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students
.
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in
my opinion this way is
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very
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exelent
.
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Becouce
of this when
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students
are
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studying
at college or
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university
.
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they
could expand their
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knowledges
.
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IELTS essay Nowdays so many people would prefer to study at colleges and universities in another counties rather than studying in their countries. my essay will try to show both sides of this.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
282 words
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