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TEACHING MORAL VALUES TO YOUNGSTERS

TEACHING MORAL VALUES TO YOUNGSTERS 5B9kD
In Era of globalization, moral decadence to the youngsters has become a crucial problem that faces society. Based on the data from the Indonesian child protection commission in 2019, the number of children in conflict with the law reached 1, 251 cases. There are several cases that were done by the teenagers or students such as crime, violence, married by accident, bullying, gangster, drugs, free sex, etc.
In Era of globalization, moral decadence to the youngsters has become a crucial problem that faces society. Based on the data from the Indonesian child protection commission in 2019, the number of children in conflict with the law reached 1, 251 cases. There are several cases that
were done
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
or students such as crime, violence, married by accident, bullying, gangster, drugs, free sex, etc.
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IELTS essay TEACHING MORAL VALUES TO YOUNGSTERS

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  American English
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67 words
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