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Teachers have the potential to interact with students at all stages of development and from all walks of life

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Teachers have the potential to interact with students at all stages of development and from all walks of life. A great teacher wants to help students along this path and to play a part in shaping the person they will ultimately become. If you want to help a child struggling with low self-esteem and problems at home, then become a teacher to encourage them and help them realize their potential. Becoming a teacher lets you impart life lessons that they will never forget and puts you in a position to influence their decisions, behaviors, strengths, weaknesses and imaginations. Essentially, becoming a teacher lets you take part in shaping the next generation.
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to encourage them and
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them realize their potential. Becoming a
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IELTS essay Teachers have the potential to interact with students at all stages of development and from all walks of life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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