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task1. The plans below show the layout of a univerity’s sports centre now.

task1. The plans below show the layout of a univerity’s sports centre now. QKLBw

the plans illustrate how to change a university’s sports centre through the layouts of both present and future. According to the plans, there are several features. First of all, there are no outdoor courts in the future plan. Instead of it, there are leisure pool, sports hall and dance studio. Leisure pool will be located in west, which is left of reception and sport hall will be in east, which is right side of reception. the dance studio will also be located in next to sports hall. Secondly, changing room will be more. It is only one in present but in the future there are two additional in end of both sides. Thirdly, gym will be extended to the right side. Last, there will be café and sport shop in front of reception in the future. From the information, the main commonly feature is that 25m pool and seating will not be changed. The location of reception is also same.

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the
 plans illustrate how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 a university’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
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centre
 through the layouts of both present and future.

According to the plans, there are several features. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, there are no outdoor courts in the future plan. Instead
 of it, there are leisure pool, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall and dance studio. Leisure pool will be located
 in west, which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactiongatheringwelcomegreetingreceivingmeeting
reception
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 hall will be in east, which is right side of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactiongatheringwelcomegreetingreceivingmeeting
reception
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 dance studio will also
be located
 in next
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall. Secondly
, changing room will be more. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one in present This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the future there are two additional in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of both sides. Thirdly
, gym will be extended
 to the right side. Last, there will be café and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 shop in front of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactiongatheringwelcomegreetingreceivingmeeting
reception
 in the future.

From the information, the main commonly
 feature is that Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "25 m"25 m
25m
 pool and seating will not be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. The location of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withreactiongatheringwelcomegreetingreceivingmeeting
reception
 is also
 same. 