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Task1: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific theories discussed in the reading passage.Reading: As early as the twelfth century A.D., the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the Americ

Task1: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific theories discussed in the reading passage. Reading: As early as the twelfth century A. D. , the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the Americ MMw1e
Both article and lecture discuss about the function of " great houses" of Chao Canyon, the massive stone building. The article implies that Chao houses served as residential purposes; they were used to store food supplies, and were used to hold ceremonies. However, disagree with the article. He says that there is no convincing evidence that Chao houses were served as residential purposes. The professor refutes each of the author's reasons. First, the article claims that because the Chao houses look similar to residential buildings built by the people from other societies in the American Southwest, Chao houses may have been used for residential purposes. The professor refutes this point by explaining that Chao houses contain very few fireplaces, and fewer than the family living in the house would need for cooking, therefore Chao houses were not built for residential. Second, the article states that the Chao houses may have been used to store food. The people in Chao Canyon needed places to store their grain maize, and the great houses have large space that could serve that purpose. However, the professor disagree with this point by saying that the theory of using Chao houses to store grain maize is determined by the fact that very few maize, and maize containers have been found in the Chao houses during excavation. Finally, the article informs that the Chao houses may have served as ceremonial centers, because the large amount of broken potteries has been found in a mound located near " Pueblo Alto" , houses used for ceremonial events. This evidence suggests that people discarded the pots in which the food was prepared and served after the ceremonies. The professor opposes this point by saying that the mound near " Pueblo Alto" also contains construction tools which suggest that the pots found in the mound were probably used by construction workers.
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function of
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; great
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; of Chao Canyon, the massive stone building. The
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article
implies that Chao
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houses
served as
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residential
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purposes
; they were
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used
to
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store
food supplies, and were
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used
to hold ceremonies.
However
, disagree with the
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article
. He says that there is no convincing evidence that Chao
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houses
were served
as
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residential
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purposes
. The
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professor
refutes each of the author's reasons.

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, the
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article
claims that
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because
the Chao
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houses
look similar to
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residential
buildings built by the
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people
from other societies in the American Southwest, Chao
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houses
may have been
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used
for
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residential
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purposes
. The
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professor
refutes this point by explaining that Chao
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houses
contain
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few fireplaces, and fewer than the family living in the
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house
would need for cooking,
therefore
Chao
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houses
were not built for residential.

Second, the
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article
states that the Chao
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houses
may have been
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used
to
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store
food. The
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people
in Chao Canyon needed places to
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store
their grain maize, and the great
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houses
have large space that could serve that
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purpose
.
However
, the
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professor
disagree with this point by saying that the theory of using Chao
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houses
to
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store
grain maize
is determined
by the fact that
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very
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few maize
, and maize containers have
been found
in the Chao
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houses
during excavation.

Finally
, the
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article
informs that the Chao
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houses
may have served as ceremonial centers,
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because
the large amount of broken potteries has
been found
in a mound located near
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; Pueblo
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Alto&quot
;
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,
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houses
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used
for ceremonial
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events
. This evidence suggests that
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people
discarded the pots in which the food
was prepared
and served after the ceremonies. The
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professor
opposes this point by saying that the mound near
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; Pueblo
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Alto&quot
;
also
contains construction tools which suggest that the pots found in the mound were
probably
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used
by construction workers.
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IELTS essay Task1: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific theories discussed in the reading passage. Reading: As early as the twelfth century A. D. , the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the Americ

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