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Studies have shown that children are spending more time watching television and less time doing active or creative activities. Explain why this is the case. Suggest possible measures than can encourage children to participate in active or creative actions

Studies have shown that children are spending more time watching television and less time doing active or creative activities. Explain why this is the case. Suggest possible measures than can encourage children to participate in active or creative actions n6e0g

A majority of the pupils are likely to spend most of their time by engaging themselves in front of the tv and does not involve in extra circular activities. This essay agrees that parents and children should have some time limit to watch television and then submit a possible solution which will be most viable one. In the past few year there has been a drastic change in means of technology and it has widely affect children of age between 10-18, where they would like to spend their time either on computer or on television. They prefer to even play games on the system itself. The variety of programs telecasted will work as disillusionment and kids are much attracted towards it. A recent survey conducted by university of masschusetts found that 89%of the students at a university score less than 50% that is B grade in their general academics and when consulted with their parents whined about their kids are more on tv and spend the time only when the exams approach very near. A possible solution is the parents should play a significant role and help them to suggest how to make use of time. parents should also arrange some trips once in a week so that kids might have a idea how the outside world is like. Even outdoor games can also be arrange in the porch itself so that can also maintain physical health of one. Attending party can also play a crucial role in building up social development, get together could also work out. Times recently reported that children who was engage in this creative activities are likely to have more IQ than whose to prefer to be on home with their tv sets. In conclusion encouragement comes from motivated, dedication and child has to understand the world is not limited just in home or they will be like frog in a well and should differentiate between real life and the one which is on screen. New innovations build a new character and can help them to climb the ladder of success.

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agrees
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 limit to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 television and then submit a possible solution which will be Did you mean "the most"?the most
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 viable one.

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 either on computer or on television. They prefer to even play games on the system itself. The variety of programs Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "telecast", the past tense form of the verb 'telecast'?telecasttelecaster
telecasted
 will work as disillusionment and kids are much attracted towards it. A recent survey conducted by university of Possible spelling mistake found.Massachusetts
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 found that 89%of the students at a university score less than 50% that is
 B grade in their general academics and when consulted with their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
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tv
 and spend the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 when the exams approach This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 near.

A possible solution is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
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help
 them to suggest how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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use
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parents
 should also
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some
 trips once in a week This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 how the outside world is like. Even outdoor games can also
 be Consider using a past participle here: "arranged".arranged
arrange
 in the porch itself This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that can also
 maintain physical health of one. Attending party can also
 play a crucial role in building up social development, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 together could also
 work out. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
Times
 recently reported that children who was Consider using a past participle here: "engaged".engaged
engage
 in this creative activities are likely to have more IQ than whose to prefer to be on home with their Possible spelling mistake found.TVtoMTVCTVTTUV
tv
 sets.

In conclusion
 encouragement This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 from motivated, dedication and child This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 understand the world is not limited This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 in Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).home, or
home or
 they will be like frog in a well and should differentiate between real life and the one which is on screen. New innovations build a new character and can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them to climb the ladder of success. 