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Task about a place near your home for improving a person’s health. What is this place? Where is this place? Who are the people that go there most? Why? How does it help people improve their health?

Task about a place near your home for improving a person’s health. What is this place? Where is this place? Who are the people that go there most? Why? How does it help people improve their health? N3b7b

This place is called VERMOSA SPORTS HUB. It is located at Imus, Cavite and is 4km from our house. There are many activities that you can do in this place such as; jogging, walking, biking, playing football, swimming and skateboarding. This place is huge. They have a 400m track oval, a field for football games, a big swimming pool if you want to take a swimming lesson and a biking trail. They also have a gym. This place will help especially for elderly. They can take a walk in the oval every morning or afternoon. That way, they can help their body in shape and boost their immune system. Before, this place was open to the public wherein they can enter in the hub for free. Me and my family went there twice. I love the place, it is clean and the area is huge. They also have a restaurant inside. It would be convenient to the people since they had everything in this place. Last November 12, it was announced that the hub will require a membership fee for those who want to go in the place. They will providing a coach that will help them to train in their everyday exercise.

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place
 is huge. They have a Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "400 m"400 m
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track
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big
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 have a gym. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
especially
 for elderly. They can take a walk in the oval every morning or afternoon. That way, they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 their body in shape and boost their immune system.

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Before
, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 was open to the public wherein they can There isn't usually a preposition after "enter". Did you mean "enter the hub"?enter the hub
enter in the hub
 for free. When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.I
Me
 and my family went there twice. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
, it is clean and the area is huge. They also
 have a restaurant inside. It would be convenient to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 since they had everything in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
. Last November 12, it was announced
 that the hub will require a membership fee for those who want to go in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
. They will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "provide"provide
providing
 a coach that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them to train in their everyday exercise. 