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Task 2 It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree ?

Marriage is an undeniable needs for both male and female. By bonding together for lifetime at suitable age it is blatant truth that society can also get benefit from the couple if the relationship between husband and wife is healthy. I agree with the statement. To start with the positive side of the essay it is clear that every single thing has it’s proper time. Now a days people are so busy with their carrier they have not that much time to think about the future life partner. They had relations for passing time as I could say they are in live-in to fulfill physical needs which is harmful for the society. Ethics are rarely found in the character of any person in the present world. When they realized their mistak, there will be no time to fixed it up. Late marriage brings them think that their children will grown up late. They haven’t any time to spend quality time with their parents; sons and daughter are so busy with their daily life and going to do the same mistake. Furthermore, parents can't ask any questions to their children which put them in guilty situation. With respect to marriage and better half, a marriage can be positively set an example for the society. By sharing the same bond with love and support can bring happiness. People are wise enough at the age of 30 that they can make their own decision. By getting marriage sense of responsibility has grown in the personality which can’t be seen any other relations. In the view to aforementioned facts and circumstances, I opine that getting marriage in a proper age can have some challenges but it should be bear in mind that nothing is impossible if there is a reliable person beside you who can support you either be a judgemental one.
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Marriage
is an undeniable needs for both male and female. By bonding together for lifetime at suitable age it is blatant truth that society can
also
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get
benefit from the couple if the relationship between husband and wife is healthy. I
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agree
with the statement.

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with the
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positive
side of the essay it is
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clear
that every single thing has it’s proper
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time
.
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Now
a days
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people
are
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so
busy with their carrier they have not that much
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time
to
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think
about the future life partner. They had relations for passing
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time
as I could say they are in
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live
-in to fulfill physical needs which is harmful for the society. Ethics are rarely found in the character of any person in the present world. When they realized their mistak, there will be no
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time
to
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fixed
it up. Late
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marriage
brings them
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think
that their children will grown up late. They haven’t any
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time
to spend quality
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time
with their parents; sons and daughter are
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so
busy with their daily life and going to do the same mistake.
Furthermore
, parents can't ask any questions to their children which put them in guilty situation.

With respect to
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marriage
and better half, a
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marriage
can be
positively
set an example for the society. By sharing the same bond with
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love
and support can bring happiness.
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People
are wise
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enough
at the age of 30 that they can
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make
their
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own
decision. By getting
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marriage
sense of responsibility has grown in the personality which can’t be
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seen
any other relations.

In the view to aforementioned facts and circumstances, I opine that getting
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marriage
in a proper age can have
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some
challenges
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but
it should be bear in mind that nothing is impossible if there is a reliable person beside you who can support you either be a judgemental one.
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IELTS essay Task 2 It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best both for the individual and for society.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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