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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Actually smoking is a bad habit. Nowadays most younger like to smoke and they don't care forward a people around him. every person want to somke should smoking in open area and should stop smoking in public places to don't cause any pain for any person. I think tody every person should stop smoking because every person know the advanteges of smoking. All media show us the disadvantages of smoking.
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IELTS essay Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.

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  American English
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70 words
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