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task 2- doctors and inventors

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The majority of people think that, doctors are more important than inventors. I do not agree with this statement because, I think inventors should be significant as much as doctors. Regarding the doctors, it is true that, they have always a respect from society. They touch people’s lives and their occupations need this. For example, when people who have serious health issues go to a hospital, they have to trust doctors in that place. Some way, we give their hands our lives. In terms of inventors, they improve our life qualities all the time. Thanks to them, we can keep in touch everyone from everywhere, find out all solutions easily and also, go far away from where we are in a couple hours. Besides, inventions use all parts of the life such as technology, engineering, art, health, etc. This is undeniable fact that, tool which use by doctors have considerable importance on the health issues and this way, lives of people can survive in a short time. In conclusion, I believe that, without inventions, doctors will be blind. We need both of them in our lives and we should give them equal value. The government should also support inventors economically and give them opportunities to create new things.
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that,
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doctors
are more
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important
than
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inventors
. I do not
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agree
with this statement
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because
, I
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think
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inventors
should be significant as much as doctors.

Regarding the
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doctors
, it is true that, they have always a respect from society. They touch
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people’s
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lives
and their occupations need this.
For example
, when
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people
who have serious health issues go to a hospital, they
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have to
trust
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doctors
in that place.
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Some
way, we give their hands our
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lives
.

In terms of
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inventors
, they
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improve
our life qualities all the time. Thanks to them, we can
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keep
in touch everyone from everywhere, find out all solutions
easily
and
also
, go far away from where we are in a
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couple
hours.
Besides
, inventions
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use
all parts of the life such as technology, engineering, art, health, etc. This is undeniable fact that, tool which
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use
by
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doctors
have considerable importance on the health issues and this way,
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lives
of
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people
can survive in a short time.

In conclusion
, I believe that, without inventions,
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doctors
will be blind. We need both of them in our
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lives and
we should give them equal value. The
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government
should
also
support
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inventors
economically
and give them opportunities to create new things.
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IELTS essay task 2- doctors and inventors

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
208 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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