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Many people believe that it is important for teenagers to make decisions about matters that affect them (such as food, clothes, entertainment, learning, etc.). To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Many people believe that it is important for teenagers to make decisions about matters that affect them (such as food, clothes, entertainment, learning, etc. ). with this statement? MoRpp
I have read an article about should grown-ups let their adolescents make their own decisions and give opinions about issues affecting them. At first, I was in two minds but as I get older and both my mother and father allow me to completely control my own life. I totally agree with this statement at the moment. I then have some profound thoughts about this topic. To begin with, I suppose adolescents would have more freedom which is always being craved by modern teenagers. Since they have the ability to make decisions about their problems and have the guts to face them, everything would be so much easier to themselves, especially to their parents. Next, making decisions about small problems in your everyday life would allow you to be autonomous and to swiftly grow up not only your physical appearance, your mental health as well. In conclusions, from the point of being autonomous in every of your issues would lead you to a point you get the trusts of everybody around you. They would trust and feel free to be with you. As what I said, everything would be much easier. I cannot possibly claim myself as an independent person, but I know what I am doing everyday to improve my problem-solving skills. I would love to give credit to my most lovely and my most vital people in my life – my parents. They have been the ones who give me the freedom which not all adolescents can have. I just want to give you some motivations by telling you that you are not alone. Be strong!
I have read an article about should grown-ups
let
their adolescents
make
their
own
decisions and
give
opinions about issues affecting them. At
first
, I was in two minds
but
as I
get
older and both my mother and father
allow
me to completely control my
own
life. I
totally
agree
with this statement at the moment. I then have
some
profound thoughts about this topic.

To
begin
with, I suppose adolescents would have more freedom which is always
being craved
by modern
teenagers
. Since they have the ability to
make
decisions about their problems and have the guts to face them, everything would be
so
much easier to themselves,
especially
to their parents.
Next
, making decisions about
small
problems in your everyday life would
allow
you to be autonomous and to
swiftly
grow up not
only
your physical appearance, your mental health
as well
. In conclusions, from the point of being autonomous in every of your issues would lead you to a point you
get
the trusts of everybody around you. They would trust and feel free to be with you. As what I said, everything would be much easier. I cannot
possibly
claim myself as an independent person,
but
I know what I am doing
everyday
to
improve
my problem-solving
skills
. I would
love
to
give
credit to my most lovely and my most vital
people
in my life
my parents. They have been the ones who
give
me the freedom which not all adolescents can have. I
just
want to
give
you
some
motivations by telling you that you are not alone. Be strong!
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IELTS essay Many people believe that it is important for teenagers to make decisions about matters that affect them (such as food, clothes, entertainment, learning, etc. ). with this statement?

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