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talking about a car company and its best car

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Do you know what is a tesla car? Do you know what makes it a special car? About 10 years ago tesla wasn't a huge company that everyone knew about. But now tesla cars are one of the most popular cars ever. Tesla was established in 2003 by Elon Musk. But it didn't get its first break until 2013 when tesla shares rose and returned them a great profit. Tesla's first car was the tesla roadster but it wasn't that successful until tesla released the tesla model 3. It became the world's best-selling electric car. The model 3 has so many features such as the all glass-roof that adds a great view for the passengers, a huge flat center console that allows you to control many things, and soft leather seats. And don't forget the safety that car has for its structure is a combination of strong heavy metals. For that, it received a perfect 5 star score by the NHTSA. And the most impressive feature is the autopilot, with it you can let the car drive you around the city. The acceleration the tesla has is pretty great with 0-60 miles in only 3. 1 seconds you will feel like you're inside an F1 car So when gas prices get higher and higher and you start looking for an electric car, Tesla will be your best choice.
Do you know what is a tesla
car
? Do you know what
makes
it a special
car
? About 10 years ago tesla wasn't a huge
company
that everyone knew about.
But
now
tesla
cars
are one of the most popular
cars
ever.

Tesla
was established
in 2003 by Elon Musk.
But
it didn't
get
its
first
break until 2013 when tesla shares rose and returned them a great profit. Tesla's
first
car
was the
tesla roadster
but
it wasn't that successful until tesla released the tesla model 3. It became the world's best-selling electric
car
. The model 3 has
so
many
features such as the all glass-roof that
adds
a great view for the passengers, a huge flat center console that
allows
you to control
many
things, and soft leather seats. And don't forget the safety that
car
has for its structure is a combination of strong heavy metals. For that, it received a perfect 5 star score by the NHTSA. And the most impressive feature is the autopilot, with
it
you can
let
the
car
drive you around the city. The acceleration the tesla has is pretty great with 0
-60 miles
in
only
3. 1 seconds you will feel like you're inside an F1 car

So
when gas prices
get
higher and higher and you
start
looking for an electric
car
, Tesla will be your best choice.
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IELTS essay talking about a car company and its best car

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
228 words
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