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Talk in detail about an inaccurate first impression you had

Talk in detail about an inaccurate first impression you had AroXM

We have a lot of first impression in our life. If we have some skills, we can make a good effect. but sometimes it doesn’t happen for the first time. But if we are an honest person, finally, we can impress other people. When I was hired at the university I have just 18 years old. I passed the employment test and was the youngest person at the central building. I didn’t have any experience except was at the school. In my office, there were full of aged men and me, only a little daughter. I was very petite and shy. I didn’t speak unless they asked me. Some of my colleagues were kind but some of them especially other women judged me in first impression and said that she is supercilious. My father is a person who has experienced man. He advised me, try to be a good listener. And behave truthfully. All the time be polite and don’t rude any way and always be on a good dressed. It didn’t take a long that most of the colleagues be friend with me and they said to me that we thought that you were a haughty but now we understand we were mistake. Finally, I could change their mind.

We have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
first
 impression in our life. If we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 effect. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 it doesn’t happen for the first
 time. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 if we are an honest person, finally
, we can impress other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I was hired
 at the university I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 18 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. I passed the employment This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 and was the youngest person at the central building. I didn’t have any experience except was at the school. In my office, there were full of aged This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 and me, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 daughter. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 petite and shy. I didn’t speak unless they asked me. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of my colleagues were kind This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them especially
 other women judged me in first
 impression and said that she is supercilious.

My father is a person who has experienced This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
. He advised me, try to be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 listener. And behave truthfully
. All the time be polite and don’t rude any way and always be on a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 dressed.

It didn’t take a long that most of the colleagues be Consider using a past participle here: "friended".friended
friend
 with Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).me, and
me and
 they said to me that we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 that you were a haughty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 we understand we were Consider using a past participle here: "mistaken".mistaken
mistake
.

Finally
, I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 their mind. 