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Talk in detail about an inaccurate first impression you had

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We have a lot of first impression in our life. If we have some skills, we can make a good effect. but sometimes it doesn’t happen for the first time. But if we are an honest person, finally, we can impress other people. When I was hired at the university I have just 18 years old. I passed the employment test and was the youngest person at the central building. I didn’t have any experience except was at the school. In my office, there were full of aged men and me, only a little daughter. I was very petite and shy. I didn’t speak unless they asked me. Some of my colleagues were kind but some of them especially other women judged me in first impression and said that she is supercilious. My father is a person who has experienced man. He advised me, try to be a good listener. And behave truthfully. All the time be polite and don’t rude any way and always be on a good dressed. It didn’t take a long that most of the colleagues be friend with me and they said to me that we thought that you were a haughty but now we understand we were mistake. Finally, I could change their mind.
We have
a lot of
first
impression in our life. If we have
some
skills
, we can
make
a
good
effect.
but
sometimes
it doesn’t happen for the
first
time.
But
if we are an honest person,
finally
, we can impress other
people
.

When
I
was hired
at the university I have
just
18 years
old
. I passed the employment
test
and was the youngest person at the central building. I didn’t have any experience except was at the school. In my office, there were full of aged
men
and me,
only
a
little
daughter. I was
very
petite and shy. I didn’t speak unless they asked me.
Some
of my colleagues were kind
but
some
of them
especially
other women judged me in
first
impression and said that she is supercilious.

My father is a person who has experienced
man
. He advised me, try to be a
good
listener. And behave
truthfully
. All the time be polite and don’t rude any way and always be on a
good
dressed.

It didn’t take a long that most of the colleagues be
friend
with
me and
they said to me that we
thought
that you were a haughty
but
now
we understand we were
mistake
.

Finally
, I could
change
their mind.
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IELTS essay Talk in detail about an inaccurate first impression you had

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
210 words
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