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Talk about yourself after 15 years

Talk about yourself after 15 years MBMRp
After 15 years, I think I will be a good doctor and save many people. Social relationships will improve and more friends will be gained. My economic condition is stable and I can support myself as well as my family. I don't know if in the future when I'm 28, I'll have a lover or get married, but I don't think I'll get married anytime soon because I want to have freedom and be able to do what I want without fear be wary of whether or not the other person wants me to do it. At this age, I think I have been able to buy a house to live in alone, but I want to live with my parents more to make them happy. I also firmly believe that I have fulfilled my dream and do what I want to do. already.
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many
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people
. Social relationships will
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improve
and more friends will
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. My economic condition is stable and I can support myself
as well
as my family. I don't know if in the future when I'm 28, I'll have a lover or
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get
married,
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married anytime
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I
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to have freedom and be able to do what I
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want
without fear be wary of
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whether or not
the other person
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wants
me to do it. At this age, I
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think
I have been able to
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a
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house
to
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live
in alone,
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live
with my parents more to
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make
them happy. I
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believe that I have fulfilled my dream and do what I
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IELTS essay Talk about yourself after 15 years

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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