Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

“Resilience as a student” - What kinds of situations or issues arise for you as a student where you feel it would help to develop greater resilience?

“Resilience as a student” - What kinds of situations or issues arise for you as a student where you feel it would help to develop greater resilience? kbYV8
First of all, I have to refer to my most adversity situation in the learning process is when I am stuck at something I will always not pass by myself such as in mathematics exercises that I cannot solve by myself I have to find something to help I pass it or in my elementary school science thesis. That is an example of my issues and how can I solve all these issues in my life. I have three different ways to help me which are, first, I look for the solution by myself even though I try my best but I cannot do it I have to use the second way. Next, I will use my trump card and-that is my support or guidance. My friends are one option for my support because we always help each other when someone in our group got this kind of situation. However, if the issue is too hard for my friend I will get some help from my brother, he knows everything that I didn’t know after I got my solution I will keep it in mind and do the last way to develop myself which is practicing in routine like do some exercises frequently to develop my skills and this is how I develop a resilience.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
refer to my most adversity situation in the learning process is when I
am stuck
at something I will always not pass by myself such as in mathematics exercises that I cannot solve by myself I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
find something to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
I pass it or in my elementary school science thesis.
That is
an example of my issues and how can I solve all these issues in my life. I have three
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
ways to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
me which are,
first
, I look for the solution by myself
even though
I try my best
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I cannot do it I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the second way.
Next
, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
my trump card and-
that is
my support or guidance. My friends are one option for my support
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
we always
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
each other when someone in our group
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
this kind of situation.
However
, if the issue is too
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
for my friend I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
from my brother, he knows everything that I didn’t know after I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
my solution I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
it in mind and do the last way to develop myself which is practicing in routine like do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
exercises
frequently
to develop my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and this is how I develop a resilience.

IELTS essay “Resilience as a student” - What kinds of situations or issues arise for you as a student where you feel it would help to develop greater resilience?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
215 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • “Resilience as a student” - What kinds of situations or issues arise for you as a student where you feel it would help to develop greater resilience?