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Talk about your plans and how to still happy

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Today I will talk about the worst issues that I face in mu current life. Firstly, the problem with my English exam and how can I prepare probably for it. Secondly, I ought to find a good girl to get married with, to be honest this step is considered a critical one for me. Moving to another problem, I do not know what I am going to do in my future and where could I proceed my education. However, as always there is nothing explicit for everyone in this life and I must keep my chain up and remain optimistic. The main reason for this is that, being delighted is really essential to have good health. In other words,
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Today
I will talk about the worst issues that I face in mu
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
life.
Firstly
, the problem with my English exam and how can I prepare
probably
for it.
Secondly
, I ought to find a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
girl to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
married with, to be honest this step
is considered
a critical one for me.

Moving to another problem, I do not know what I am going to do in my future and where could I proceed my education.
However
, as always there is nothing explicit for everyone in this life and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
my chain up and remain optimistic. The main reason for this is that,
being delighted
is
really
essential to have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health.
In other words
,

IELTS essay Talk about your plans and how to still happy

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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