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Global warming is increasing day by day. What are the causes of global warming and what can be done to eradicate this global problem.

Global warming is increasing day by day. What are the causes of global warming and what can be done to eradicate this global problem. yRBGD
Nowadays, existance of human being is threatened by a serious environmental cause know as global warming. The causes of global warming are multifactorial, thus needs a systematic approach from government organizations and individuals to tackle the issue. To begin with, the important causes of current globalwarming are, firstly, the industrial revolution in the modern times has led to an increased release of gases into the atmosphere like carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide, methane, to name a few, these gases are known to increase the temperature of the atmosphere by trapping ultraviolet rays into the earth’s atmosphere. Moreoover, population explosion has resulted in excessive dependence on fossil fuels for cars, public transport and railways, these machines emit a lot of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. In addition, deforestation done by the humans for their habitat and agriculture has resulted in huge loss of trees who are the cleaners of combustion gases from the atmosphere. Furthermore, ozone layer is depleted from many parts of earth, thus allowing harmful rays of sun to enter the earth’s surface. The measures that government needs to take to solve or to reduce the global warming are, first of all, conserving the forest area by implementing strict norms and encouraging to plant more tree in the cities. Secondly, release of gases from industries should be reduced by instaling pollution control filters. Thirdly, discouraging use of fossil fuels for vehicles and promoting usage of renewable source of energy such as solar energy, tidal power and wind power. To conclude, global warming is a very serious issue, which needs to be addressed at the priority. The government and all the individuals should join hands to reduce this eminent threat and save earth and future generations.
Nowadays,
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existance
of human being
is threatened
by a serious environmental cause know as
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global
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warming
. The causes of
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global
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warming
are multifactorial,
thus
needs a systematic approach from
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government
organizations and individuals to tackle the issue.

To
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begin
with, the
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important
causes of
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current
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globalwarming
are,
firstly
, the industrial revolution in the modern times has led to an increased release of
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gases
into the
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atmosphere
like carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide, methane, to name a few, these
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gases
are known
to increase the temperature of the
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atmosphere
by trapping ultraviolet rays into the
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earth’s
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atmosphere
.
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Moreoover
, population explosion has resulted in excessive dependence on fossil fuels for cars, public transport and railways, these machines emit
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a lot of
carbon dioxide into the atmosphere.

In addition
, deforestation done by the humans for their habitat and agriculture has resulted in huge loss of trees who are the cleaners of combustion
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gases
from the
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atmosphere
.
Furthermore
, ozone layer
is depleted
from
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many
parts of
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earth
,
thus
allowing harmful rays of sun to enter the
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earth’s
surface. The measures that
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government
needs to take to solve or to
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reduce
the
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global
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warming
are,
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first of all
, conserving the forest area by implementing strict norms and encouraging
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to plant
more tree in the cities.
Secondly
, release of
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gases
from industries should be
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reduced
by
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instaling
pollution control filters.
Thirdly
, discouraging
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use
of fossil fuels for vehicles and promoting usage of renewable source of energy such as solar energy, tidal power and wind power.

To conclude
,
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global
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warming
is a
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very
serious issue, which needs to
be addressed
at the priority. The
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government
and all the individuals should
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join
hands to
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reduce
this eminent threat and save
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earth
and future generations.
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IELTS essay Global warming is increasing day by day. What are the causes of global warming and what can be done to eradicate this global problem.

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