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I would tell you about my trip to Do Son beach. I went with my family in the summer two years ago. We stayed there for two days. We spent a lot of time swimming in the sea. Besides, we also eat a lot of seafood. It was so delicious. In the late afternoon on the first day, I and my aunt rented a double bike to ride along the beach. It was quite tiring but it was fun, I have seen a lot of beautiful scenes. And most especially, it is was the first time I watched the sunrise on the sea. It was very beautiful and the early morning air was extremely fresh. It is a trip I will never forget because it gave me many great experiences, along with beautiful scenes and delicious food.
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IELTS essay talk about your most favorite

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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