Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

accept bad situation or try to improve, discuss both sides

accept bad situation or try to improve, discuss both sides RWnAV

Being in a situation that you feel too much pressure or out of focus is something that nobody prefers. Although, some people think that sometimes you have to push yourself to keep in this situation, while others believe that you have to make yourself more satisfying situations. In this essay, I will discuss the two points of view. However, I believe that take the risk to find a better situation would be more much prefered to me then just staying where you are. In the begining, people who think that you have to accept your position might saying that for several reasons, one of it could be that they are afraid of taking such risk that could bring more troubles to them. That is very likely to happen, but if they could plan very well to handle that, they would probably avoid the troubles that could happen. Another reason might be that they are too lazy to make an effort, and that is the most bad situation that sombody could ever be in. On the other hand, people who stand with the improvement are more likely active and happy people since they do not accept to be in such isolating situation. In aaddition to this, they will probably get a better chances in more better placec or situations which will make them more satisfying. Moreover, they will do what they love and what they want, which will make them more effective, useful and do a great job. In my point of view, i believe that, in most of cases taking the risk and trying to enhance the position of yourself is more convenice to me, i do not accept to be in a situation that i am unsatisfyed or under pressure. As a final piont, everybody have his own situation that nobody else can judge. Therefore, whatever you believe, you should always plan very well to it. And do not be afraid of taking the advanture.

Being in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 that you feel too much pressure or out of focus is something that nobody prefers. Although, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 push yourself to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
, while others You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholdconsiderconcluderegardacceptadmit
believe
 that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 yourself more satisfying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situations
. In this essay, I will discuss the two points of view. However
, I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholdconsiderconcluderegardacceptadmit
believe
 that take the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 to find a better You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 would be more much Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "preferred", the past tense form of the verb 'prefer'?preferred
prefered
 to me Did you mean "than"?than
then
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 staying where you are.

In the Possible spelling mistake found.beginning
begining
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 accept your position might saying that for several reasons, one of it could be that they are afraid of taking such This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 that could bring more troubles to them. That is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 likely to happen, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if they could plan This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well to handle that, they would probably
 avoid the troubles that could happen. Another reason might be that they are too lazy to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 an effort, and that is
 the most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 that Possible spelling mistake found.somebody
sombody
 could ever be in.

On the other hand
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who stand with the improvement are more likely active and happy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 since they do not accept to be in such isolating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
. In Possible spelling mistake found.additiona addition
aaddition
 to this, they will probably
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a better chances in Use only "better" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.better
more better
Possible spelling mistake found.placeplacedplacesplacerplace c
placec
 or You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situations
 which will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 them more satisfying. Moreover
, they will do what they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 and what they want, which will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 them more effective, useful and do a great job.

In my point of view, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholdconsiderconcluderegardacceptadmit
believe
 that, in After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the cases") or simply say "most cases".most of the casesmost cases
most of cases
 taking the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 and trying to enhance the position of yourself is more Possible spelling mistake found.convenienceconvinceconveneconveningconventicle
convenice
 to me, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 do not accept to be in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am Possible spelling mistake found.unsatisfied
unsatisfyed
 or under pressure.

As a final Possible spelling mistake found.pointpint
piont
, everybody The pronoun 'everybody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "has", "had".hashad
have
 his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withposition
situation
 that nobody else can judge. Therefore
, whatever you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholdconsiderconcluderegardacceptadmit
believe
, you should always plan This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well to it. And do not be afraid of taking the Possible spelling mistake found.adventure
advanture
. 