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TALK ABOUT YOUR LAST HOLIDAY

TALK ABOUT YOUR LAST HOLIDAY yx5EJ
Summer vacation was the holiday I like most last night. My last holiday was back home to visit my maternal grandmother. T went with my family and travel by motorbike. I was at my grandmother’s house and left after a week. I feel that the weather there was extremely wonderful, fresh, quiet, and poetic. Every day, I was taken by my grandmother to work in the garden and pick fruit to eat. My grandmother’s house mainly grows fruit because we both love to eat fruit. During my time in the countryside, I almost became a real farmer. Experience at my grandmother’s home was the best experience I’ve ever had.
Summer vacation was the holiday I like most last night. My last holiday was back home to visit my maternal
grandmother
. T
went with
my family and travel by motorbike. I was at my
grandmother’s
house
and
left
after a week. I feel that the weather there was
extremely
wonderful, fresh, quiet, and poetic. Every day, I
was taken
by my
grandmother
to work in the garden and pick fruit to eat. My
grandmother’s
house
mainly
grows fruit
because
we both
love
to eat fruit. During my time in the countryside, I almost became a real farmer. Experience at my
grandmother’s
home was the best experience I’ve ever had.
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IELTS essay TALK ABOUT YOUR LAST HOLIDAY

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
109 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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