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Talk about your journey to hatay.

Talk about your journey to hatay. WYy20
Today is Thursday, it isy first day in Rehanli wherey uncle lives. The weather is quite hot and there is no wind. On the contrary, it is somehow cold at night and i consult you to sleep in the roof. However, let me tell you about my studying for ielts, it is good and everything processes as planed. Decide What to write is something hard and not that easy. Moreover, i want to go to ankara to practice my English and prepare myself for that exam. İ hope of we can help more people but there is nothing to do or imagine, because of the severL problems. Last and not the least, i want to get married as soon as possible due to the problems i face.
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first
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Rehanli
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lives
. The weather is quite hot and there is no wind.
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at night and
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consult you to sleep in the roof.
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, it is
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good
and everything processes as planed. Decide What to write is something
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hard
and not that easy.
Moreover
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want to go to
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ankara
to practice my English and prepare myself for that exam. İ hope of we can h
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problems. Last and not the least,
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want to g
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IELTS essay Talk about your journey to hatay.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
127 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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