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Talk about your goal in life

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Goal are two types such as short term goal and long term goal. we all are known that without goals or aim people can't focus on your future. the without goal not a destination without aim people are aimless. the our goal is become to be a successful in own life. the without goal or aim we are not successful in life. we all known that goal must be important to make a successful women. there are two types of goal, one is short term goal and other is long term goal. the short term goal is I will go to abroad for further study and I gain my own practicle knowledge. The long term goal is I will complete my study and I choose a multinational company for further job experience to gain my own practicle knowledge about the my study.
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are two types such as short
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term
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goal
and long
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goal
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we
all
are known
that without
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goals
or aim
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people
can't focus on your future.
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the
without
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goal
not a destination without aim
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people
are aimless. the our
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goal
is become
to be a successful in
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own
life.
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the
without
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goal
or aim we are not successful in life.
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we
all known that
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goal
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must
be
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important
to
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make
a successful
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there
are two types of
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goal
, one is short
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term
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goal
and other is long
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term
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goal
.
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the
short
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term
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goal
is I will
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go to abroad
for
further
study and I gain my
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own
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practicle
knowledge. The long
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term
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goal
is I will complete my study and I choose a multinational
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company
for
further
job experience to gain my
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own
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practicle
knowledge about
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IELTS essay Talk about your goal in life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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