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talk about your eid and what to do

talk about your eid and what to do 3Y5l5
Today is the second day of the Eid, the situation is horrible, due to the stupid individuals. I really wanted to help, but the madness of some people suspended me. However, if you want to be rude with, I will be more rude. Another point to consider, our travelling to Hatay, our have encouraged problem with the vehicle; the driver did not come, so no way to get there and visit our uncle. Really, if you want to do goodness, no need to show off. Try to keep it secret.
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Today
is the second day of the
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Eid
, the situation is horrible, due to the stupid individuals. I
really
wanted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
,
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but
the madness of
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some
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people
suspended me.
However
, if you want to be rude with, I will be more rude. Another point to consider, our travelling to
Possible spelling mistake found.
Hatay
, our have encouraged problem with the vehicle; the driver did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
no way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
there and visit our uncle.
Really
, if you want to do goodness, no need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
off. Try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
it secret.
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IELTS essay talk about your eid and what to do

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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