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Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. Do you agree or disagree? How important is letter-writing?

Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. How important is letter-writing? gGyQl
The last few years have witnessed the increasing use of mobile phones and computers as a communication tool. Consequently, some pupil even think traditional letters are not significant any more, and will disappear in our life eventually. Personally, I do not agree with the opinion. To start with, as long as they connected with internet, we can use mobile phones and computers to contact with our family members and friends anywhere and at any time. Besides, compared with letters, using computers or smart phones to write and send emails is much quicker. Emails can reach the recipients almost right after we click the mouse button, while it take a few days for letters to be delivered. Additionally, latest development of information technology offers many powerful functions making communication over internet more enjoyable and pleasant. For instance, Video call software allows us to watch the other person or a group of people while taking to them enhancing the communication experience a great deal. Nevertheless, traditional letters still have important role to play, although electronic devices leads the way forward in people’s daily contact with their dear ones. Firstly, for any service related to the Government like Electricity, water connection and pension related issues, the applicant has to submit a letter mentioning the relevant details and the same will be acknowledged by the concern department for future references. Secondly, at some important events or occasions, sharing the hand written messages with our loved ones make them happier and thus, they will be cherished as a memories for a lift time. In conclusion, mobile phones and computers will continue to be main means of communication, because of their convenience and efficiency. However, I believe traditional skill of letter writing is still important, as traditional letters are preferable in some special occasions.
The last few years have witnessed the increasing
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use
of mobile
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phones
and computers as a
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communication
tool.
Consequently
,
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some
pupil even
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think
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traditional
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letters
are not significant
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any more
, and will disappear in our life
eventually
.
Personally
, I do not
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agree
with the opinion.

To
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start
with, as long as they connected with internet, we can
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use
mobile
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phones
and computers to contact with our family members and friends anywhere and at any time.
Besides
, compared with
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letters
, using computers or smart
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phones
to write and
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send
emails is much quicker. Emails can reach the recipients almost right after we click the mouse button, while it take a few days for
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letters
to
be delivered
.
Additionally
,
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latest
development of information technology offers
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many
powerful functions making
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communication
over internet more enjoyable and pleasant.
For instance
, Video call software
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allows
us to
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watch
the other person or a group of
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people
while taking to them enhancing the
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communication
experience a great deal.

Nevertheless
,
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traditional
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letters
still
have
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important
role to play, although electronic devices leads the way forward in
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people
’s daily contact with their dear ones.
Firstly
, for any service related to the
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Government
like Electricity, water connection and pension related issues, the applicant
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has to
submit a
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letter
mentioning the relevant
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details
and the same will
be acknowledged
by the concern department for future references.
Secondly
, at
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some
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important
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events
or occasions, sharing the
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hand written
messages with our
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loved
ones
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make
them happier and
thus
, they will
be cherished
as
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a memories
for a lift time.

In conclusion
, mobile
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phones
and computers will continue to be main means of
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communication
,
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because
of their convenience and efficiency.
However
, I believe
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traditional
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skill
of
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letter
writing is
still
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important
, as
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traditional
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letters
are preferable in
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some
special occasions.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. How important is letter-writing?

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