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talk about you interview day.

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Today is interview day, so do not be confused and stressed. All what you ought to do and say is really straightforward. Moreover, the jury wants to see your leadership personality, show them as much self-confidence as you can and do not speak quickly nor do you hesitate. However, this the last day in your plan to study at Bigazici university and maybe you will not get another one, consequently, preserve it and just give a shot. Also, I do not know the number of the potential candidates, perhaps it is huge or minimal.
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Today
is interview day,
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so
do not
be confused
and
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stressed
. All what you ought to do and say is
really
straightforward.
Moreover
, the jury wants to
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see
your leadership personality,
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show
them as much self-confidence as you can and do not speak
quickly
nor do you hesitate.
However
, this the last day in your plan to study at
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Bigazici
university and maybe you will not
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get
another one,
consequently
, preserve it and
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just
give a shot.
Also
, I do not know the number of the potential candidates, perhaps it is huge or minimal.

IELTS essay talk about you interview day.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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