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Talk about ways to improve your appearance.

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Talk about ways to improve your appearance. In modern society, having the advantage of appearance will help you to have many opportunities in society or work. Relationships with people around also become easier. Having an appearance helps you become self-confident. trust and easily persuade people, make a good impression on your customers and boss. It also shows that you are a person who loves and takes care of yourself. There are many ways to improve your appearance. First, you need to make a plan to improve, second, set the goals you want to achieve. okay, the last is determination. Every day can exercise, drink enough water, plan healthy eating. It is important not to drink alcohol, not to eat fast food, not to drink carbonated water, . . . Create a habit of going to bed early to wake up early, you can do yoga, meditation to help your body relax and relax. Of course, you have to persevere and try every day because this is not a day or two with results.
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opportunities in society or work. Relationships with
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around
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become easier. Having an appearance
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helps
you become self-confident.
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trust
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persuade
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people
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make
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good
impression on your customers and boss. It
also
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shows
that you are a person who
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loves
and takes care of yourself. There are
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many
ways to
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improve
your appearance.
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, you need to
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make
a plan to
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improve
, second, set the goals you want to achieve.
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okay
, the last is determination. Every day can exercise, drink
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enough
water, plan healthy eating. It is
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important
not to drink alcohol, not to eat
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fast
food, not to drink carbonated water
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Create a habit of going to bed early to wake up early, you can do yoga, meditation to
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help
your body relax and relax.
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have to
persevere and try every day
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this is not a day or two with results.
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IELTS essay Talk about ways to improve your appearance.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
173 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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