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Talk about the positive and negative features of yours.

Talk about the positive and negative features of yours. 3xoxb
I am not a perfect person, like everyone I have some positive sides and some negative sides of my character. I am always looking at the bright side of life because I am almost an optimistic person who tries to enjoy life as much as she can, and lives every day like it’s her last day. I can easily control my anger in different situations, but I do not be silent in the face of injustice. I think the worst trait of my character is impatience. Additionally, my family and also my friends believe that I am a little bit stubborn, but I do not agree with them. Another negative aspect of my personality is that I get stressed quickly in bad situations and this causes me to not be able to perform as well as I should. Finally, I try to strengthen the positive traits of my personality and turn the negative traits into positive ones and I hope so.
I am not a perfect person, like everyone I have
some
positive
sides and
some
negative
sides of my character.

I am always looking at the bright side of life
because
I am almost an optimistic person who tries to enjoy life as much as she can, and
lives
every day like it’s her last day.

I
can
easily
control my anger in
different
situations,
but
I do not be silent in the face of injustice.
I
think
the worst trait of my character is impatience.
Additionally
, my family and
also
my friends believe that I am a
little bit
stubborn,
but
I do not
agree
with them. Another
negative
aspect of my personality is that I
get
stressed
quickly
in
bad
situations and this causes me to not be able to perform
as well
as I should.

Finally
, I try to strengthen the
positive
traits of my personality and turn the
negative
traits into
positive
ones and I hope
so
.
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IELTS essay Talk about the positive and negative features of yours.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
161 words
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