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Artificial intelligence and workspace

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Intelligent robots are promptly replacing most of the jobs in the workforce. While, it is possible that unskilled jobs could fall into the hands of AI, on the contrary it is unlikely that humans will go out of the work. This essay will discuss why we should embrace the advancement of artificially intelligence since it is helping and making our life easier than before. Robots may ultimately replace unskilled and time-consuming jobs, for instance during the initial COVID-19 lockdown time more workers were forced to stay in the home but the demand for service has started to rise at an unprecedented rate, to tackle this issue companies were started to replace human workforce with AI machines, which led to a dramatic increase in the supply chain, for these reasons essential and large scale labor would get more efficiency from AIs. Conversely, there are so numerous jobs that can't be replaced by robots. These include Psychology, Social work, Law and Order, Education, Medical field. Humans have the privileges of evolutionary abilities and rational thinking. Moreover, if AI needs technical aids and supports only humans can repair it, consequently the role of humans is always higher than AIs. The ability to learn from mistakes, innovations are making humans more superior to robots. In a nutshell, unskilled labor might eventually shift to Artificial Intelligence since it is more sophisticated than unskilled humans, also it is faster than humans. However, the long period of evolutionary privileges and cognitive abilities are making the role of humans in the workplace inevitable. Ultimately few jobs could change into full robotic on the contrary humans will find a way to survive.
Intelligent robots are
promptly
replacing most of the
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jobs
in the workforce.

While, it is possible that
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unskilled
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jobs
could fall into the hands of AI,
on the contrary
it is unlikely that
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humans
will go out of the work. This essay will discuss why we should embrace the advancement of
artificially
intelligence since it is helping and making our life easier than
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before
.

Robots may
ultimately
replace
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unskilled
and time-consuming
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jobs
,
for instance
during the initial COVID-19 lockdown time more workers
were forced
to stay in the home
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but
the demand for service has
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started
to rise at an unprecedented rate, to tackle this issue
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companies
were
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started
to replace
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human
workforce with AI machines, which led to a dramatic increase in the supply chain, for these reasons essential and large scale labor would
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get
more efficiency from AIs.

Conversely
, there are
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so
numerous
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jobs
that can't
be replaced
by robots. These include Psychology, Social work, Law and Order, Education, Medical field.
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Humans
have the privileges of evolutionary abilities and rational thinking.
Moreover
, if AI needs technical aids and supports
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only
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humans
can repair it,
consequently
the role of
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humans
is always higher than
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AIs
. The ability to learn from mistakes, innovations are making
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humans
more superior to robots.

In a nutshell,
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unskilled
labor might
eventually
shift to Artificial Intelligence since it is more sophisticated than
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unskilled
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humans
,
also
it is faster than
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humans
.
However
, the long period of evolutionary privileges and cognitive abilities are making the role of
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humans
in the workplace inevitable.
Ultimately
few
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jobs
could
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change
into full robotic
on the contrary
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humans
will find a way to survive.
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IELTS essay Artificial intelligence and workspace

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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