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Talk about the education system

Talk about the education system 8Lgar
Education system is the most important tool or a thing I our life. We can't imagine a life without education and without education we can't run up the life because education providing the more opportunities and skills in our life, It is main main tool to successful men or women in our life. I think education give a more knowledge and providing multiple skills I daily life routine. The all people need a Likely to qualifications to find a new work or more job opportunity or get a higher salary. The education make a life essay in the modern generation. The all schools and colleges providing a education, Morel value, knowledge and teach a different subject to providing a different more knowledge.
Education
system is the most
important
tool or a thing I our
life
. We can't imagine a
life
without
education
and without
education
we can't run up the
life
because
education
providing the more opportunities and
skills
in our
life
, It is
main main
tool to successful
men
or women in our
life
. I
think
education
give a more knowledge and providing multiple
skills
I daily
life
routine. The all
people
need a Likely to qualifications to find a new work or more job opportunity or
get
a higher salary. The
education
make
a
life
essay in the modern generation.
The
all schools and colleges providing
a
education
, Morel value, knowledge and teach a
different
subject to providing a
different
more knowledge.
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IELTS essay Talk about the education system

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
122 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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