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Talk about the cities life and advantages and disadvantage

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Some people think that cities are best place to living ther. So today i discuss about a advantages and disadvantage of cities life. Advantages of cities life -First of all I think cities is the best as compared to rural area because the range of opportunities are more such as a job opportunities. The many people are move to cities to find a job. The standard of living is best and cities are offer greater employment possibilities. There are many things are best in cities as compared to rural, such as no electricity problem, no water supply problem. So next I talk about disadvantage of cities life - There are many negative and positive points of cities life. The cities life are more expensive as compared to rural areas because the standard of living is higher and the cost of living are more higher. The houses is more expensive and more of the congested Houses.
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IELTS essay Talk about the cities life and advantages and disadvantage

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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