Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

talk about small business

talk about small business pK1Dw
I realize that buying products that are traditional, with healthy ingredients or with minimal environmental impact has set the trend in recent years. Our Vietnam is an agricultural country with abundant raw materials, so we are fully capable of creating such products. My small business is the production and sales of a number of items such as natural cosmetics, health care products, creative handmade items. . . my brand's target customers are adults who care about their health and want to build a green lifestyle. With a small stock, I will not set up an office in the city, but instead build a small workshop with 10 workers in the countryside. I think besides product quality, brand is the most important so I want to invest in packaging design and advertising campaigns. My plan is to leverage social media like TikTok, Facebook for marketing
I realize that buying
products
that are traditional, with healthy ingredients or with minimal environmental impact has set the trend in recent years. Our Vietnam is an agricultural country with abundant raw materials,
so
we are
fully
capable of creating such
products
. My
small
business is the production and sales of a number of items such as natural cosmetics, health care
products
, creative handmade items.
.
.
my
brand's target customers are adults who care about their health and want to build a green lifestyle. With a
small
stock, I will not set up an office in the city,
but
instead
build a
small
workshop with 10 workers in the countryside. I
think
besides
product
quality, brand is the most
important
so
I want to invest in packaging design and advertising campaigns. My plan is to leverage social media like TikTok, Facebook for
marketing
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay talk about small business

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
143 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: