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Precise the Earthquake

Precise the Earthquake rG6XL

Earthquake always causes great damage to people and the environment, which occur yearly around the world affecting millions and killed hundreds of thousands people around the world which cost billions. It caused major changes and continue to do so today and in the future. No one can’t advance forecast when it occurs: In the morning, afternoon or in the midnight? No one can’t answer, but scientist and researchers can do that, they have to discover in order to collect the data of the disasters: Where the disaster effect to, when it occurs…. , so that they can inform us in advance, and we can prepare everything (e. g food, water, place to live) and reduce the damage cause. Thanks to that people can be survived. But can we predict all Earthquake correctly? We can’t know because it is nature which can occur suddenly, and change to other place. Sometimes it might be true, sometimes is false.

Earthquake always causes great damage to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and the environment, which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaterializedevelopappearshowtranspireensue
occur
 yearly around the world affecting millions and killed hundreds of thousands This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 around the world which cost billions. It caused major This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 and continue to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 and in the future. No one can’t advance forecast when it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaterializedevelopappearshowtranspireensue
occurs
: In the morning, afternoon or in the midnight? No one can’t answer, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 scientist and researchers can do that, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 discover in order to collect the data of the disasters: Where the disaster effect to, when it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaterializedevelopappearshowtranspireensue
occurs…
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,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they can inform us in advance, and we can prepare everything (e. g food, water, place to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
) and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the damage cause. Thanks to that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can be survived
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 can we predict all Earthquake correctly
? We can’t know This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is nature which can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaterializedevelopappearshowtranspireensue
occur
suddenly
, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 to other place. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
 it might be true, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 is false. 