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Talk about an interesting animal or bird you like

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Well I am a animal lover I love to to interact with them and see them with managed eyes but today I am going to talk about animal which is very interesting and I love it it is a dog and we bought it from a dog shop because now it is very hard to find a good dog the quality of the dogs is very calm and he always keep your house and the stranger away from our house on the last time I met him around 1 week ago because I am I school right now and a live too far from home and if I talk about the interesting thing about him he is very friendly and teenager we don't buy it always is very caring he always support not support he always looked after hours which is very when I bought it accomplished it because I was very enthusiasm and output very influence to find it that was the best moment and the constantly father was very happy like was likewise there were no other dogs Shimla to him it is very good that I always feel proud that dog I have
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animal lover I
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love
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to to
interact with them and
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see
them with managed eyes
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but
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today
I am going to talk about animal which is
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interesting and I
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love
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it it
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dog and
we
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bought
it from a
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dog
shop
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because
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now
it is
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very
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hard
to find a
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good
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dog
the quality of the
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dogs
is
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very
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calm and
he always
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keep
your
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house
and the stranger away from our
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house
on the last time I met him around 1 week ago
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because
I am I school right
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now
and a
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live
too far from home and if I talk about the interesting thing about him he is
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very
friendly and
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teenager
we don't
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buy
it
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always is
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very
caring he always support not support he always looked after hours which is
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when I
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bought
it accomplished it
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because
I was
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very
enthusiasm and output
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very
influence to find it that was the best moment and the
constantly
father was
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very
happy like was
likewise
there were no other
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dogs
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Shimla
to him it is
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very
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good
that I always feel proud that
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dog
I have
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IELTS essay Talk about an interesting animal or bird you like

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
195 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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